Special Night Put Football in the Spotlight
October 24, 2022
SPECIAL NIGHT PUT FOOTBALL IN THE SPOTLIGHT
Calm warm winds blow throughout the stadium at six o’clock on a Friday evening. From the bleachers, light clouds cover the bright setting sunlight and create a pink glow over Greenway. For now, there is light chatter. Ticketers calmly grant admission, and vendors begin popping kettle corn. The field is mostly bare.
By seven, the stadium has turned to chaos.
The warm breeze has vanished. In the student section, it reaches a mighty 91 degrees after the sun goes down. The bleachers rumble with the stomping of student feet. Sweat beats down from the student section, as they scream and cheer for Demon Football, packed in like sardines. The NFL Monday Night Football theme begins to play. The sounds get louder and the cheers grow stronger. This is it.
Greenway Football is back home.
And it’s not just any home opener. On September 23rd, the school unveiled the brand new football field to celebrate five decades of Greenway football. To welcome this new facelift, Greenway invited 50 of the school’s best football players over the course of half a century. Among these are current Cincinnati Bengals offensive line coach Frank Pollack, former Carolina Panthers fullback Richie Brockel, and former San Francisco 49ers defensive back Mike Salmon. Needless to say, the Greenway stadium is packed with nostalgia.
Athletic director, Mr. Feldman, worked hard to ensure that tonight’s dedication was special. Feldman has worked at Greenway for 20 years and has seen the ups and downs of Demon football firsthand. His fondest memory? Back to back regional championships in 2018 and 2019.
“A very proud moment,” Feldman said as he describes the victory. “Our program was on a down swing for some years and these years really set Greenway Football back on the map where it has stayed.”
Feldman is absolutely correct. When the Demons took the 4A Skyline Regional title in 2018, it had been their first since 2003, 15 years earlier. Feldman thinks the success of Demon Football after their back-to-back championships will be longstanding.
“I see it continuing to be successful,” he said. “I would hope that this reputation would never change.”
This “reputation” that Feldman mentions is a direct attribution to the alumni that stand on the field on Friday night. For 50 years, they have created the Demon image that dominated the 4A Skyline Region. And as Greenway Football looks to the future, it seems that they’re in quite good hands with head coach Ed Cook.
Mike Salmon, class of 1989 alumni and former NFL defensive back, adds his observations in a brief interview after the ceremony.
Salmon continues talking about his experience with Greenway Football, and the similarities between his experience in the 80’s, and his observations on the field Friday Night.
“When I got to college, I felt like I was better prepared than a lot of the guys I played against,” Salmon said, describing how Greenway Football helped him to the pros. “I thought I was getting college-level coaching at a humble high school level.”
He’s talking about Gregg Parrish, who coached Demon Ball from 1983 to 1992. According to Mike Salmon, their style of disciplined coaching gave him a significant advantage over his college opponents and equipped him for the NFL, and for the rest of his life. He’s seeing that same discipline in the 2022 team, too. And the numbers say the same.
They look like they’re clamping down,” Salmon said in response to a Greenway touchdown. “They’re starting to play with some more emotion, and I’m excited to see what’s gonna happen. They’re looking strong right now,” he said.
The Demons fought hard through the second half after securing a close score in the first and second quarters. In the third quarter, an incredible screen pass to wide receiver Junior Devari Wade put Greenway in position to take the lead after he rushed for an additional 50 yards and scored a touchdown. Quarterback Sophomore Tyler McNally had a statistically wonderful game, with a 56% completion rate, two touchdowns, and a total of 288 passing yards.
Outside linebacker Andy Botic terrorized the Titans’ offense, with a total 4.5 tackles, and an interception for a touchdown in the second quarter. On the same note, Senior Joseph Rueda Martinez had 3 tackles on the night – two for a loss, and a quarterback sack.
Unfortunately, they fell short to the Thunderbird Titans by a score of 58-27.
Against the Titans, Greenway was consistently driving down the field and establishing a solid passing game. While the rushing game may need improvements with a total of 78 yards, it’s clear that the Demon offense is making the necessary adjustments to win. And that’s the Demon Spirit that creates unforgettable alumni like those present on Friday night.
Mariathna Avila Arroyo • Oct 30, 2022 at 2:19 pm
I like how in this article it describes the effort that the demon football player put into the game.
Brisney Ibarra • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:28 pm
I really like how detailed it is it shows how are demon football players are working hard and getting ready to play football. It also showed how our school sprit is always supporting out demon football players.
Lucy Longo • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:25 pm
I love all the descriptive words and details you use throughout the strory.
Matthew Vargas • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:19 pm
This quote “The warm breeze has vanished. In the student section, it reaches a mighty 91 degrees after the sun goes down. The bleachers rumble with the stomping of student feet. Sweat beats down from the student section, as they scream and cheer for Demon Football, packed in like sardines. The NFL Monday Night Football theme begins to play. The sounds get louder and the cheers grow stronger. This is it.
Greenway Football is back home. ” really makes this school feel special. The amount of school spirit is through the roof that this years football season is back at home.
Akhil Choda • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:14 pm
“I thought I was getting college-level coaching at a humble high school level.” I really liked this quote because it focused not just on the current team but on how Greenway helped shape pro-athletes. The quote from an alumni, one who became successful, makes it feel like a professional article.
Daanika Curiel • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:13 pm
Your diction is incredible. The imagery used throughout the story, especially in your lead, kept me interested and really set the scene.
Jocelyn Mondragon • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:10 pm
I love the visual representation that you included in the beginning. it really brought an exciting feeling and got me hooked right away.
Zoie Brant • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:03 pm
My favorite part of this news article is the beginning, the way you wrote the beginning made me feel excited on the inside. Great work.
Joshua Pace • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:03 pm
I like how the article talks about the past and experiences of Greenway football, and the information about about the game against the titans is well written and gives you an idea of whats going on.
Miranda Ortiz • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:02 pm
I really liked the picture of the fifty best football players to play at Greenway for the fifty years greenway has been open. I also liked the organization of this article.
Mia • Oct 27, 2022 at 4:01 pm
I love the amazing detail in the beginning. It makes it feel like the students are really in the bleachers watching the game start.
Jenna Clark • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:59 pm
“By seven, the stadium has turned to chaos.” I like the sudden shift and how you can picture the change in energy between before and during the game
Atianna Flores • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:58 pm
I really like how you started out the story. It made me feel as if I was there experiencing it with everybody else.
Madison Bailey • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:57 pm
The scene setting is very descriptive and detailed.
Xavier Kelly • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:55 pm
Very descriptive in the beginning making me feel like I’m there.
Mackenzee • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:55 pm
Very strong lead and amazing photos with captioning.
Aaron Bingham • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:53 pm
“A very proud moment,” Feldman said as he describes the victory. “Our program was on a downswing for some years and these years really set Greenway Football back on the map where it has stayed. – I like this quote the most because it talks about the coach’s outlook on his many years of experience on the field.
Jose Gonzalez • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:53 pm
The beginning section and that whole ‘build-up’ part was really well written!
Jessica Hodges • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:52 pm
I love how this article uses vivid details to make the reader picture the realities of High school football. It also creates a nostalgic feel when talking about Greenways history.
Kihlee Amaral • Oct 27, 2022 at 3:52 pm
I really like how much detail there is in this new article. It makes you feel like you are there.